Steve and Francine fantasy clip?

[biggworm1]

Is this worth sending in? Its 4 min long if you want to listen. I just downloaded Adobe Audition the other day and started playing with it. Its a pretty cool program, but complicated as hell. Any thoughts on how to improve this would be appriciated.

http://www.wormified.com/francine_crush_on_steve2.mp3



Thank,

Jay

[BillyDubbs]

I would not send that in. It is too long. I would cut it up alot more, at least to two minutes, and have more going on at once. and you have to throw in a clip of francine yelling from her old jingles


What I was going to do till I lost the clips was insert nonononnno and grrr into the swingers conversation about being a bear.(have him start saying no, he is not a bear) then put some of francine talking in the background(from one of the clips that she was on from foundrymusic). then have steve accept being a bear and respond with grrr. There is a clip of francine saying yeah, from the clip of her sounding like an idiot. mix a couple of slowed down ones of those with grrrrrr's (simulated sex) then throw a loud, tempo slowed grrrrr, followed by francines noise from the end of the jingles.

that's just me though