so far it looks pretty fucking good mv. the texture on the gray looks very nice. the nasa .wav file is pretty creepy. also a more "menacing" font for the trailers + ominous music = more gooder. maybe the ps3/spiderman/foundrymusic font
This advice is from a lazy writer. When I do get the urge to write, I sometimes get ideas in several different directions so I start new stories in each direction and see where they go. Sometimes it's a dead end, sometimes it develops and, other times two directions can be merged.
I never have the full storyline in my head, I start at point A and see how things play out. Just have fun with your ideas and see where they go.